Hi Guys,

I've been writing 69-word, theme-based stories for the digital lifestyle magazine, The Brown Scooter, every month.

Read off and let me know what you think/feel :)


For whom the cell tolls!

This is a take off on a song by Metallica "For whom the bell tolls" (original lyrics)

Make his call from the hill in the early days
Constant error deep inside
Roaming cell, with (it) they run through the endless gray
A voice from the other end says, "Kaun hai be?"
For a cell, men would kill. Why? They do not know
Mobile cos test their pride
Men of five, still alive through the raging glow
Gone insane from the disconnection that they surely know

For whom the cell tolls
the battery goes down
For whom the cell tolls

Take a look to the sky before the network dies
It's the last time you will
Blackened roar, massive roar, fills the crumbling sky
Shattered reception fills his cell with a ruthless cry
Stranger now are his ears to this mystery
He hears the static so loud
Crack of dawn, all is gone except the bill to be
Now they see what will be, roaming charges bhi

For whom the cell tolls
the network goes down
For whom the cell tolls


Rajiv Iyer said...

shit man! that was cool .... at the risk of being thrust with a class-action lawsuit by you & your attorneys - maa kasam, mereko yeh idea kyon nahin aaya?! :P .... if u dun mind, then am gonna be 'inspired' to do some work in a similar vein :P

keep the funny work man! count me in ur regular visitors!

CruciFire said...

@ rajiv - thnx a lot man!! oh yeah u can get 'inspired' and write something on similar lines but dont u dare 'internalise' anything! ;)

Surya Ragunaathan said...

U know what? you are one guy who's in the wrong industry...wasting his creativity...

Awesome!! Had a good laugh! am short of words...

Please get a life, Jk!
(ps: send it to Rashmi Bansal)

CruciFire said...

@ surya - thnx a lot for the comment.. I knw yaar, but wot to do, kisi ko bol mujhe recruit karne ko even im desperate to get out :) ... MTV, [V] or some big shot ad agency... hey bhagwaan, kab mera uddhar hoga?! ;)

Tushar said...

hmmmm, a really welcome blog. something that conveys the truth in the way which would bring a smile on a face. quite ironical to 'the truth always hurts' n stuff... we need more of these jay... brilliant creativity!!

CruciFire said...

@ tushar - thnx a lot dude... much appreciated! keep checking back...

Master of Disharmony said...

killer dude!

CruciFire said...

@ Mod - heyy thanx a lot dude...

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