Hi Guys,

I've been writing 69-word, theme-based stories for the digital lifestyle magazine, The Brown Scooter, every month.

Read off and let me know what you think/feel :)


#55wordstory - Map/Maps

The word for today was 'Map/Maps.'


He was scrutinizing the Holy Grail from the hilltop.

Two mountains and a crater to reach the treasure, marked with a V.

He encircled the tips and bases of the mountains in patterns. The landscape wriggled.

Nails jumped over the crater with a swipe and the Canyon was his.

He loved exploring her.



Summer said...

These 55 words will be the reason an 18 yr old will have wet dreams tonight.

CruciFire said...

*gulp* Speechless. This has to be the hottest response I have received for any 55wordstory (second edition) till now! *gulp*

Vivek said...

:D Brilliant!

CruciFire said...

Thanks boss :D

VJ said...

Awesome! When I read her... I had to read it again.
Blush, did I!

CruciFire said...

Awwww thanks VJ, that's a really sweet reply :) Glad to know I manage to evoke such emotions in my readers..