Hi Guys,

I've been writing 69-word, theme-based stories for the digital lifestyle magazine, The Brown Scooter, every month.

Read off and let me know what you think/feel :)


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#55wordstory - Relationships


Hey guys, the theme for today was 'Relationships.'


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He had been her anchor for long. She couldn't see him any longer.

He was miles away from her, nautically.

Their compasses pointed towards completely opposite directions now.

Their once smooth sailing affair was in troubled waters now.

The RelationShip was a wreck.

Long distance love works. Knot.

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4 comments:

Shaily said...

Beautiful post! So well articulated in such few words. Its tricky to write a heart-breaking story and you managed it brilliantly JK. Enjoyed reading it! :)

CruciFire said...

@S Awwww thank you sooooo much for the comment Shails... good to have you back :) Do check back for more stories...

Cris said...

Wow you wrote about me! How sweet :-p

CruciFire said...

@C Oh it is huh? Pure co-incidence :)