Hi Guys,

I've been writing 69-word, theme-based stories for the digital lifestyle magazine, The Brown Scooter, every month.

Read off and let me know what you think/feel :)


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#55wordstory - Space/spaces


Twitter had killed this blogging star and it's been close to 3 years since I've posted anything on this blog.

Long posts are still not my cup of tea but I came across this interesting contest on Twitter which weirdly re-ignited my passion for writing - http://bit.ly/If4Bs8


So, this weary traveler is gonna start writing again.

**Offer open till Blogger.com files for bankruptcy or my enthusiasm runs out.

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#55wordstory - Space/spaces



“Iwantmyspace.”

“Havepatience.”

“Youaretoocontrolling. Stoppushingme. Youarechokingmewithsmallissues.”

“Ipromisetogiveyousomesoon.”

“Whydon'tyoujustkillme? Ifeelhollowinside.”

“Itisnormal. Calmthefuckdown.”

“Youdon'tunderstandme. Iwanttodeleteyoufrommylife.”

“Thiswillendsoon. Homesweethomeformethen.”

“IwishIcouldjumpoutthewindowsandescapetoadifferentworld.”

“Suchanautankiyouare.”

Theassemblylineworkerinsertedthe 'Space bar' intotheemptyslotandsentoutthekeyboardforpackaging.

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Comments/brickbats/pink chuddies welcome!

4 comments:

R said...

interesting... there are 2 ways I can read it, and it does make sense both ways! :)

is that how you conceived it?

CruciFire said...

@R thanks R.. yes it was conceived that way, in layers...and when smart readers like you interpret it in more ways than one, it makes the post even more special.. personal if I may say so!

Priyanka Dharamsi said...

Just came across this on twitter. And absolutely loved the way you carried the two parallel stories.
Kudos! :)

CruciFire said...

@P Thank you so much Pri.. do check back daily for more updates :)